X-Google-Language: ENGLISH,ASCII-7-bit X-Google-Thread: f996b,851bfdf257710a35 X-Google-Attributes: gidf996b,public X-Google-ArrivalTime: 2001-04-11 11:36:05 PST Path: supernews.google.com!sn-xit-03!supernews.com!cyclone-sjo1.usenetserver.com!news-out-sjo.usenetserver.com!e420r-sjo4.usenetserver.com!news-out.usenetserver.com!newshub2.rdc1.sfba.home.com!news.home.com!news2.rdc2.tx.home.com.POSTED!not-for-mail Message-ID: <3AD4A490.9A6557F0@homail.com> From: Kyle Baker Organization: @Home Network X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.61 [en]C-AtHome0407 (Win98; U) X-Accept-Language: en MIME-Version: 1.0 Newsgroups: alt.ascii-art Subject: Re: Ascii Art Newbie References: <3AD3A820.BB2E4F16@home.com> <20010411085309.19844.00000972@ng-fw1.aol.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Lines: 96 Date: Wed, 11 Apr 2001 18:35:06 GMT NNTP-Posting-Host: 24.13.148.172 X-Complaints-To: abuse@home.net X-Trace: news2.rdc2.tx.home.com 987014106 24.13.148.172 (Wed, 11 Apr 2001 11:35:06 PDT) NNTP-Posting-Date: Wed, 11 Apr 2001 11:35:06 PDT Xref: supernews.google.com alt.ascii-art:5234 Thanks for the tips, I find this a lot of fun. I will work on making it smaller. The dreaded wrap, that is what I was afraid of. More incentive to make it smaller. Later. Kyle Spunk1111 wrote: > > >Message-id: <3AD3A820.BB2E4F16@home.com> > >I was just wondering if I could get some opinions on my work below. Do > >I have potential? > > Absolutely Kyle. It's a beautiful rose. > It wrapped a little because it is a little wide. > Try to keep within 72-80 characters in > width to avoid the dreaded wrap. > > Now that you have the design, try to draw > the same image but smaller. You'll find that > the smaller you try to go, the more difficult > it becomes. > > And the final thing, which is more of a > personal preference -- not anything technical. > You might want to use less :'s and ;s. > The overall image is very 'dotty' and on > some viewers, difficult to see. JMO. > > Post more! > > -joan > -- _ > .-, <,`-.__.-'> > / | ) ( > | ; /_ ^4^ \_ > \ \.-~~-.__\=_ -'- _/= jgs- joan stark > \ `---;` spunk1111@juno.com > / | |__ > ; / , | / `~. > | .'~..__| /.' `'~,_) ASCII ART GALLERY: > T (` | ( ; | http://www.ascii-art.com > \ \ '._) \ \_ > jgs '._) ',__) > > > > > .''.'. .., > > .'`''` ..:. .' ;,. > > : :`.'' .`:.``:..: : `. > > .' : `.: : ``. : > > : : `. : : : > > : : `. : : : ,.'.''. > > : : '.: : .'` : : > > : : `. ...:.' : : > > : : ..'`''`''''''` : : > > : ...'' : : > > : .' : : > > : .' : : > > : .' : : > > : : : : > > : : : : > > : : : : > > : : :.' > > : : : > > : : : > > : : : > > : : : > > : : : > > : : : > > : : : > > : `. : > > '. : : > > `. `. : > > `': : > > '.. ; > >`:''''''````''''.... `'. .' > >.....'''''''```````''''.. > > `: . ````''`'. ..'`'` ....''' ``` > >.......`'.`', > > ': `''. ... `'.. ...'` ...''` ,,''```` > >`'..' `. > > '., ```''''.. `''` `'` > >...''' `'''` > > ````'''''...... ```: :``''''```` > > ````'''`:. :. > > `': :. > > : : > > `: : > > : : > > KPB `: : > > : : > > > > > > > > > > > >