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From: spunk1111@aol.comQQ (Spunk1111)
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Date: 11 Apr 2001 12:53:09 GMT
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Subject: Re: Ascii Art Newbie
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>Message-id: <3AD3A820.BB2E4F16@home.com>
>I was just wondering if I could get some opinions on my work below.  Do
>I have potential?

Absolutely Kyle.  It's a beautiful rose.
It wrapped a little because it is a little wide.
Try to keep within 72-80 characters in
width to avoid the dreaded wrap.

Now that you have the design, try to draw
the same image but smaller.  You'll find that
the smaller you try to go, the more difficult
it becomes.

And the final thing, which is more of a
personal preference -- not anything technical.
You might want to use less :'s and ;s.
The overall image is very 'dotty' and on
some viewers, difficult to see.  JMO.

Post more!

-joan
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