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From: noonius@netexpress.ee (Kristian Kirsfeldt)
Subject: Re: The Drunks (still drunk): cartoons strip
Date: 1997/08/18
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"Jonathon R. Oglesbee" <oglesbee@fullnet.net---remote-to-reply> wrote:

>     "Don't look now, Walter, but there's 
>   that flatfoot who ran us off, yesterday."
>                         /
>                        /
>           __________  /               _____
>          //////////\\                \     \
>         ////////// \\\                \~~~~(_)
>        /// __    __ \\\              __\___(__)____________
>        /|| (O|  |(O  ||\            |          |           |
>        \_    (__)    _/             |          |           |
>          \  ///\\\  /               |          |           |
>__________/\________/\____           |          |           |
>`.  ' .' \   \   /    /.'`\__________|          |           |__
>. '  . `. `\  \_/   /` .`` \         |          |          _|
>________/  `\_/ \_/`.'`\.`' \        |          |         (__)
>       /' .` .'o . `. '.\` .`\       |          |         (__)
>______/`` . .' '.  .' . '\. `'\______|          |         (__)__
>      |. `. ' .o '  . ' `/'` ./      |          |           |
>______|' .   ` . .' .  '/`. `/_______|          |           |__
>      |'`   .  o ` .  '/ .` /        |          |           |
>      |'. `. . ' . .' /____/         |__________|___________|
>      /______________/     \           /______|__|_______\
>_____/________[__]__//-/-/-/__________/                   |__
>    /               /_/_/_/          /         /          /
>___/          /           |_________/         /          /___
>  /  ___     /   ___     / JRO      |         |         |

>eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
>eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

>etc, etc, etc, etc

Jonathon, I think that Your pictures are pretty good, even the jokes
are funny. But I would like to complain about something.

My personal opinon is, that making a cartoon-strip isn't just copy'n
and paste'n and then writing new lines for the characters and then
adding a few (e.g. 2) changes to the pictures. It seems that some of
Your cartoons are made this way (Drunks, Breakfast time) and when each
picture is the same, it gets pretty boring. I hope You will think
about my ideas when You next time start drawing a cartoon. I know it
will take more work and time but the result will also look better.

Please don't feel insulted and keep on drawing, fellow artist!

Kristian Kirsfeldt
noonius@netexpress.ee