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From: Shimrod <csg824@wing.rug.nl>
Subject: suggestions, comments on my art please?
Date: 1996/10/14
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I made this ascii of a hawk carrying a spear for my new handle, SPARHAWK
can anyone make any suggestions on how to improve on this? I don't 
really like the tail of the hawk yet, nor do I like the point of the
spear.

Any help appreciated, thx.

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