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From: by884@freenet.toronto.on.ca (llizard)
Subject: Re: suggestions, comments on my art please?
Date: 1996/10/14
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In article <32620CD7.5965@wing.rug.nl>, csg824@wing.rug.nl says...
>((`                                  
>( ``\    \\|/                          
>|````\  ,;,~\_                     
>\`````\',,,\_`\                     
> )````;,.,,/ ;'                     
> \````;,,./   d                   
>  )``;,,,/  ,d8                      
>  \`;',,/  '//|                    
>   |;',V   //  K                    
>   )`;/ \ //  W                   
>  /',V   >>  A                    
>(`',/ \ //  H                     
>((,/   >>  R                      
>(,'   //  A                       
>     //  P                        
>    //  S                         
>    "
>I made this ascii of a hawk carrying a spear for my new handle,
>SPARHAWK can anyone make any suggestions on how to improve on
>this? I don't really like the tail of the hawk yet, nor do I
>like the point of the spear.   Any help appreciated, thx.
>
>Herman Hiddema http://huizen.dds.nl/~shimrod  <csg824@wing.rug.nl>
 
((`            
( ``\    \\|/  
|````\  ,;,~\_  
\`````\',,,\_`\ 
 )````;,.,,/ ;'  <--the beak is confusing
    
((`            
( ``\    \\|/  
|````\  ,;,~\_  
\`````\',,,\-`) <--Would this work?
 )````;,.,,/     

And I incorporated your "SPARHAWK" into the spear. Here are two versions of 
the spear.
((`                .
( ``\    \\|/     /|
|````\  ,;,~\_   / |
\`````\',,,\-`) //\|
 )````;,.,,/   // 
 \````;,,./   //
  )``;,,,/   /S
  \`;',,/   /P
   |;',V   /A
   )`;/ \ /R
  /',V   >>
(`',/ \ /H
((,/   >>
(,'   /A
     /W
    /K
   //
    
((`               . 
( ``\    \\|/    /|
|````\  ,;,~\_  < |
\`````\',,,\-`) /\| 
 )````;,.,,/   // 
 \````;,,./   //
  )``;,,,/   /S
  \`;',,/   /P
   |;',V   /A
   )`;/ \ /R
  /',V   >>
(`',/ \ /H
((,/   >>
(,'   /A
     /W
    /K
   //

And what about turning the bird around? Then it's easier to read the 
"SPARHAWK".
.               '))
|\    \|//    /'' )
| >  _/~,;,  /''''|
|/\ ('-/,,,'/'''''/
  \\   \,,.,;''''(
   \\   \.,,;''''/
    S\   \,,,;''(
     P\   \,,`;'/
      A\   V,';|
       R\ / \;'(
        <<   V,'\
         H\ / \,`')
          <<   \,))
           \A   `,)
            \W
             \K
              \\

Hope it helps. The tail looks okay to me.

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                           "    "
          llizard aka EJM <by884@freenet.toronto.on.ca>